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7th Hokage's past



Orochimaru returned to the village. He was standing there as if waiting for the villagers to come. He had an evil smile on his face. "Today everyone will know the hokage's true past. he has been living in lies his whole life and this is a perfect thing to do for revenge," Orochimaru laughed.

Ziar walked up to Orochimaru. "You're Orochimaru correct? One of the legendary sannins right?" Ziar smirks then points his sword at Orochimaru. "This is gonna be funn."

"huh, just you wait once everyone's here," Orochimaru said. 

"Yeah good idea so they all can watch me beat you." Ziar smiled

"Huh, I hate over confident people," Orochimaru smriked. They waited there for more people to come.

Zuki stood there with Zair in front of Orochimaru "..."

Star walked up, seeing Orochimaru. "You!" she said, glaring at him, then looking at Zair. "Who are you?" she asked.

"And who are you?" Zuki questioned

"My name is Star" she answered calmly.

"Hmm....weird name for a girl like you" He was being mean.

Star smirked "weird? The only weird thing I see here is you." she smiled.

Zuki laughed, "Do you even own a mirror?" Takes out her sword

"Well yes, I did. but it shattered when you were around." Star smirked. "Anyways, I'm not here to fight you, it's Orochimaru I'm after, so excuse me kid." She said, walking past Zuki and standing next to Zair, looking at Orochimaru with disgust. "I should have known you'd come"

"Incase you didn't know." Zuki cuts her on her cheek " I'm Orochimaru's helper from now on"

Star glared angrily at Zuki, holding her cheek where blood appeared. "You're foolish" she said, taking out her twin blades. She swung them around and slashed at Zuki, cutting her in the chest and on the arm where blood started to form.

Zuki laughed "You're the foolish one." The cuts were cured in seconds! "I've learned from Tsunade, she taught me all of this." She slashes her sword at Star cutting her deeply in her arm.

Star winced in pain but ignored it. She then punched Zuki in the stomach and took her dagger, stabbing her then tripping her to the ground. "If Tsunade knew how you betrayed us she wouldn't of showed you." she said angrily.

It was a substitution justsu and Zuki appears behind Star "No one knew I was working for Orochimaru," She stabs her. "No one." And disappears into the woods

Star fell on her knees in pain then forced herself to stand up as the blood started to flow. She winced in pain as she watched Zuki run off.

Orochimaru's voice came from behind them. "She's under a mind control jutsu."

Swatchick!! (this is the sound effect of Harun landing on the ground nearby)
Harun draws his two swords and points the longest at Orochimaru.
"This has gone on long enough..."

Waiting for the right moment, Harun charges at Orochimaru from the side, swinging both blades in a wide arc towards the back of his neck!

Orochimaru opened his mouth and let his long tounge out. His tongue quickly wrapped around Harun and threw him near Star's feet.

"I should have known someone as nasty as you would do that to someone." Star said coldy, referring to Zuki. She helped Harun up "You okay?" she asked him, then readying her blades for Orochimaru.

Harun raises his arm in front of Star. "Not yet" He smiles. When he was thrown, he dropped shortest sword at Orochimaru's feet. "You underestimate me. Do you really think I would attack so recklessly without a good reason?"
At that momment, the Tag wrapped around the hilt of Harun's sword exploded with a burst of flames!!

"W-what happened??" Star asked,confused and watching as it exploded with a burst of flames. "How'd that happen?"

"I attatched an exploding tag to the hilt of my sword, so it would be hidden while I was holding the sword," explained Harun. "I knew that Orochimaru is too powerfull to be hit with a simple sword attack. My intention was to get the sword near to him so that he would be caught in the explosion caused by the tag."

Ziar shook his head as he watched them fight. "You really think a paper bomb is gonna defeat Orochimaru. In fact he's probally gonna use the explsion to get behind you easier." Ziar sheathed his sword and jumped over to Star and used a healing justsu to heal her wounds.

"Thank you." Star smiled. She then looked back over at Orochimaru.

Justin sat in a nearby tree chuckling at the sight of the pathatic battle. Taking on a sennin? Genious....not. He starts mumbling to himself. "This is entertaining to say the least."

"Your not so smart yourself then Justin." Tsome smirked from behind him.

"Oww...cheap shot Tsome-sensei... But taking on a sennin head on is suicide, especialy one as heartless as Orochimaru. You must at least try to plan two steps ahead." Justin responded without looking away from the action.

Tsome shrugged. "You take me on all the time... But you're right about the heartless crap..."

"Yes, yes. Miss sannin... But I know most of your moves and reactions by heart. Facing him blindly with out information is a bad idea. *pause* Wait I have fair fights with you all the time. Maybe I should upgrade from chik.... I mean genin to Sennin too." Justin chuckled.

Tsome chuckled. "You'll have a loooong time before you become a Sennin..."

"Or I could just join the Akatsuki and become infamous on my own." Justin looks at Tsome for the fist time knowing her regard for the missing ninja.

Tsome chuckled. "Really now... Well, if you were to do that you'd be another on my list to die..." she said quietly.



Zuki was on a tree "My head hurts so much!!" Eyes turn red "I can't remember anything!"

"I guess the distance was too far, my jutsu wore off," Orochimaru said.

"I dont know why but something is wrong with you!!" Zuki throws a kunai "Get away from me!!"

Orochimaru tilted his head to the left and the kunai miss him. "You think I'm bad. Look at your Hokage, keeping you in lies. He never told you did he?"

Ziar appaired behind Orochimaru faced his back to his back, "Never told us what?"

"Shut up Orochimaru, they're not ready yet." A voice came from the sky.

"What do you mean Lord Hokage? What are we not ready to know?" said Ziar.

"I guess its time. I am the..."

"He is the son of the first hokage, the hidden son," Orochimaru interupted.

"Thats it?...Why keep that a secret? He was an honorable man there is no shame in being his son, so why keep it secret?" Ziar looked kinda puzzeled.

"Because he was the 9-tailed fox," Orochimaru said.

"What!?!? Lucky...I wish I could of been the 9-tailed fox....I mean really who wouldn't.Oh what were you in the past life the 9-tailed freaken fox." Ziar said to try to encourage the Lord Hokage.

"No, I was attacking the village. It was something that my dad was was trying, I came in the middle of it and it took over my body. It was a Jutsu that made people show their ture self. And mine was the nine-tailed fox, killing people. I hid this because I didn't want people to know how evil I really was. But believe me. I have changed."

"Eh what's in the past is past. You're good now, that's all that matters." said Ziar

Faints



"Tsome-chan lets go do somthing. That "fight" left me bored and hungry." Justin urged his sensei.

Tsome nodded and smiled. "That sounds good." she chuckled.

"Where to sempai?" Just asked jumping yet keeping his balance on the limb suspended eighty feet from the ground.

Tsome shrugged. "I have no idea..."

"Woohoo ramen shop!" Justin shouted

Tsome grinned. "That sounds good."

Justin then stuuters and fades away being only an after image of him seeing as how he had shot off that fast.

Tsome chuckled and walked slowly, enjoying the day. (yes, I am like Shikamaru!! XD)



"So Orochimaru are you ready to Die?" Said Ziar.

"Not if I'm here" Zuki gets in front of Orochimaru.

Ziar laughs, "That much of a coward that you use kids to protect yourself. Now get out of my way girl."

Zuki gets her sword out and says nothing

Star glared at Zuki "You again, don't you know when to give up?" she asked, taking her twin blades and stabbing her, then kicking her to the ground.

It was a substitusion justsu. "Yoo slow." Zuki appears behind Star and stabs her in the back.

Orochimaru smiled and dived straight down to Zair with the sword comming out of his mouth.

"Humm for a sennin, you're pretty slow." Ziar said as he appeared above Orochimaru and hit him into a tree below, making the sword get stuck in the tree.

A sound came from the other side. "How fast would you be with a sword comming out of your mouth?" Orochimaru jumped up over Zair and held his sword, preparing to slash him.

"I'd still be as fast." Ziar pulled out his sword and put it in his mouth and created two swords out of chakara and blocked Orochimaru with the sword in his mouth and slashed him with the other two.

"Summoning no jutsu!" Orochimaru yelled. The ground shook. Suddenly there was an explosion. The smoke filled the air.

A little girl with raven dark hair rushed out of the Academy, her big brown eyes peered out in fright from under a faded blue cap, "Stop it! Stop! People will get hurt!"

Merc ran in and grabbed Yuki's arm. "Hey! Are you nuts kid?!You're not even a genin yet right?!"

She looked desperatly at Merc, "I know but he's hurting people! We have to stop him!" She shrugged out of Mercs grasp, eyes wide open in terror and shouted as though her pleas would stop the enemy, "Stop! Please!"

Merc scooped up Yuki in her arms. "That's the most dangerous person ever, kid...He's out of your league to fight..Leave it to the jonins and chunins like me and Tsome-sensei."

She wiggled desperatly in Merc's arms, "But can't you see?! He's hurting them! He's going to destroy the Village! The place I love! The place I can find my big sister!" She shouted at Orochimaru, practically crying, "Please! Stop it!"

"Oo... An over excited one," Orochimaru looked at Yuki. The snake swooped down towards Merc and Yuki mouth open.

Merc's eyes widened and turned,sheilding Yuki with her back.

Little Yuki's heart beat raced.

Merc jumped, knowing Orochimaru would probably hit her, but not the young girl.

Ziar grabbed the snakes and pulled Orochimaru to him. "I'm not done with you yet." Ziar then slashed his stomach with one blade, his cheast with another and made a small slice on his face with the last blade.

Little Yuki crawled behind a rock, terrified of the man with snakes but at the same time determined to help the Village. She bit her lip and hugged her knees, heart pounding in her skull, the palms of her hands were clamy and she couldn't think straight, except that she needed to stop that man. What would big sis do? Immediatlt she answered her own question. She would wait for an opening to strike. Quietly a small trembling hand pulled out a kunai and brown eyes peeked over the rock at the fight.

Orochimaru used a substitution justsu. He also saw the kunai that Little Yuki threw. When he appeared, him and the snake headed toward Yuki. She couldn't see him for the rock was bigger then her. The snake opened his mouth wide. It got closer and closer. Yuki heard it comming and looked back. The snake took this chance and swooped towards her. Yuki started to run an involuntary scream escaped her, but the snake was too fast and within no time the snake took her into its mouth. Yuki's last cry could be heard inside its mouth. 

Little Yuki felt like she was being squashed alive, the enormous pressure inside squeezed all the air out of her lungs, the acid juices running across her skin already began burning into her skin. She couldn't breath. She couldn't move. Stars were spinning in front of her eyes even if she couldn't see. She just wanted to save her village. Big sis... I was going to be a ninja. I was going to be like you...

Tsome came running and saw Yuki being eaten. She growled and summoned Nagini, her giant fox.

Nagini bit into the snake's neck, making it open its mouth.

Ziar jumped into the snake's throat and grabbed Little Yuki and jumped out and set her down far from the battle. "Are you gonna be all right?"

"So what happened while I was gone?" Zuki smiled

"Hahaha, that pathetic little girl had no chance," Orochimaru laughed.

"GGGRRRRAAA! OROCHIMARU, YOU HAVE GONE TOO FAR. I'M GONNA KILL YOU ONCE AND FOR ALL!" Cedric's voice came from the sky. He had his battle staff in his hands. As he came down, his staff began to change colours.

Little Yuki coughed feebly, from her thin throat emmited faint, tiny mewling cries. Her faded blue cap was clutched in one hand, a hiate from a friend griped tightly in another. It was as though, even then, she still wanted to be a ninja. The acidic juice from the snakes throat had began eating into her, leaving large patches of red bleeding sores. Unconcious tears leaked form her eyes that were gummied together. And then just as it seemed she was getting back to life, her will fluttered and her form lapsed into stillness.

One beat... One beat... Two beats... One beat... Silence.

"Damnit! Don't you die on me." Ziar begins using a high level healing justsu that takes alot of his chakara. "Come on, come on. Don't give up, you can make it." Yuki's wounds start to heal slowly.

Tsome jumped off of Nagini as he wrestled with the snake. She ran over and knelt down next to Yuki and Ziar. "Is she alright...?"

"I don't think the justsu is strong enough to heal her completly. I'm not really trained in healing techniques." Ziar began using all of his chakara.

Little Yuki's body didn't stir. Her wounds stopped healing. No amount of chakra could force dead cells to heal. Her chest remained quiet. Her body was already cooling. Her body all curled up was a husk of the energetic girl she was.

"No... She's, she's... Dead." Ziar gets up and screams, "OROCHIMARU! YOU"LL PAY FOR THIS!!!" Ziar bit his thumb and made hand signs. "Fenikkusu!!" A giant pheonix appaired.

The Pheonix screeched then flew towards Orochimaru.

Tsome picked up Little Yuki's body and started walking away from the battle, wanting to take the body away so it didn't get damaged further.

Ziar pulled out his legendary sword Salamader.

Pheonix grabed the giant snake and began pecking at it and burning it

Ziar the jumped off of Pheonix to the snake and charged at Orochimaru while he was destracted with Cedric Ziar sliced threw Orochimaru with his fire sword and appaired on the other side Orochimaru was then stunned, "CEDRIC NOW!!

Cedric bit his finger "summoning no jutsu!" he shouted. There was a blast of smoke and as it cleared a big golden dog with three heads jumped out. "Fire Dragon Flame Blast jutsu!" Cedric sshouted doing some handsigns. "help me father" cedric wispered. He put his hands in front of his mouth and a steam of fire headed straight towards Orochimaru. It was shaped like a dragon.

Ziar made some hand signs"Pheonix Fire Ball jutsu!"Ziar blew a fire ball that looked like a pheonix at Orochimaru




Yuki Kinomoto sat on the fence of the dilapidated building. It's been a while since she's been here. There had been an intrusion by Orochimaru and she had been told to go somewhere the furthest from the action. She shuddered. She hoped they would beat the sennin once and for all. She just wanted to live in peace. She flicked her red hair out of her face, waiting out the battle. Hopefully no innocents got in the way.

Tsome walked up to the house and saw Yuki sitting on the fence.

Yuki Kinomoto squinted at the setting sun, she saw a figure standing there, although she couldn't make out who it was. Warily she drew a kunai incase it was one of Orochimaru's minions.

Tsome looked at her. "You can put that away before you hurt yourself..." she said. "I'm just trying to find where she lives." as she said this, she looked at Little Yuki in her arms.

Yuki recognised who she was and slipped the kunai back, "Gomene Tsome sensei. Who is she? Is she OK? Shouldn't she be at the Hospital ward?" When she drew closer she recognised the faded blue cap.

"What's your name? Haka Noriyo? Don't worry Haka chan. You're safe now. Here." I pulled my blue cap off and placed it on the little girls head. The raven haired child was sobbing, face soot stained, "But big sis. My family..." I held the trembling child in my arms highlighted against the fire that burnt down a house and a family. "I'm so sorry Haka chan. I'm so sorry."

Yuki lifted a hand to touch a cold, acid scared face, "Tsome sensei? What happened to her."

"She was killed by Orochimaru... we couldn't save her...." Tsome said sadly.

The fourteen year old looked up at her desperatly, "But she's sleeping. Look Tsome sensei. She's sleeping, just sleeping. Tell her to wake up. She needs to go to the hospital wards. Why aren't you taking her there?" Her voice had an odd detached calm.

Tsome sighed. "She's not sleeping, Yuki... She's dead.... I need to figure out what to do with the body..."

"She's NOT DEAD!" Yuki strained to control herself, "I already saved her Tsome sensei. She can't be dead." But her voice breaks and her cheeks have become wet. "Haka..."

Yuki hugged the limp body, pulling it away from Tsome sensei, "Haka... I'm so sorry. Big sis couldn't save you this time... Haka chan. I'm so sorry." Her shoulders were shaking with the force of the silent crying.

Tsome put a hand on her shoulder.

"Tsome sensei. She doesn't have a family. Can I take Little Yuki home?" Yuki Kinomoto didn't turn around. She held onto that little childs body as though it was a lifeline.

Tsome nodded. "I want to go with you... to make sure you'll be alright..."

Slowly she stood up, the child clasped to her tightly. Each step took an eternity. She ignored Tsome Uchiha, or more accuratly she had forgotten about her. All she felt was the memories of watching that faded blue cap flit from place to place. Avoiding the child out of fear she might get in the way. What right had Yuki to do that? Little Yuki was a child too. She needed to be acknowledged too. She needed more than too be watched over from afar.

The lead weight was too light. Something was missing. She reached her home and pushed herself untill she reached the bathroom. Once there she bathed Little Yuki, wiping every sticky trace of her death away. She dressed the corpse in a small nightgown she had out grown, but hadn't thrown away yet. It fit her perfectly. Leaving her in the bedroom, she went into the backyard, onto the small hill top. "Tsome sensei. I want to bury her here. I had always wanted to take her home. But she wasn't a stray cat. I can't do that to her. Now, I've probably killed her."

Yuki found it strange she still hadn't stopped crying.

Tsome put her hand on Yuki's shoulder and pulled her into a hug.

Yuki hugged her tightly letting loose, howling her loss into the world.

She got out the spade and dug a shallow grave. Placing the fragile body in it, made Haka look even smaller. Yuki placed the cap into her arms. It didn't take long. "Tsome sensei? I can't do this. Can you... Please?"

She couldn't cover that small hopeful face. She just couldn't do it.

Tsome nodded and started burrying Haka, bringing back memories of her own losses. Once she finished she put a small yellow rose on the grave.

"Did Orochimaru kill her?" It was a simple question but a deadly one.

Tsome nodded. "He will pay for this, I can already promise you that..."

Yuki looked drained, "That's good."

Tsome nodded again and looked over at her. "Are you going to be alright...?"

Her face had hollowed and she looked like a husk. "I don't know. I'm going to sleep. When I'm put into a team, please tell me who my sensei is Tsome sensei?"

Tsome nodded. "I'll do that..." she said softly.

"Thank you sensei." With that she padded into her bedroom.



Elswhere Justin sat pateintly waitin beside eight empty bowls of shrimp ramen. "I wonder where Tsome wandered off to?"

Tsome had gone to her small apartment and got a change of clothes. She walked to the ramen shop and sat down next to Justin, her head falling to the table.

Merc walked into the ramen shop.Her face was emotionless but she was extremely pale.

"hey, guys," Cedric sat down. "i'll have 1 bowl of shrimp ranmen," he looks at Merc. "and 1 kids meal." he continued.

"If its for me,don't bother..i'm not hungry..."Merc drank a glass of sake she brought from home.

"Ok Merc. hey wait up.. hey. Yea you. Canceal the kid's meal. CAN-CEAL THE KIDS MEAL! YES!," Cedric yelled.

"Dear Jashin!Can't you find another way to give me a head ache?!"Merc growled and drank more sake.

Justin looked ocver,"Whats wrong*gulp* Tsome-chan?"

Merc gave Justin the Dont you dare ask.. look."I doubt she feels like talking about it..'

Justin choked on a large shrimp. Merc was always one to be grim and serious so even she didnt want to talk about, then it was BAD. "Nevermind."

"Good boy."Merc mumbled.She took another sip of sake.

Cedric ate his shrimp and left.

Merc suddenly doubled over.She fell on her hands and knees and breathed heavily,and puked up blood.After,she fell over,passed out.

Cedric appeared in front of her. He held her shoulders and shock her, are you ok?"

"Cedric dont worry about her...its usual for her,generaly. Merc just nod if this is another one of your spasms." Justin asked as if by rutine.

Merc shook her head.She opened her eyes alittle."Nope..Not this time..Crap.."She got up.

"Uh......il be back!" Just then sprints oof to the central center. He reached the desk out of breath. "We need a med team at the ramen shop stat!!!" He then accompanies the emergancy team to the truma spot.

Merc was coughing up more blood.She shuddered."I don't need help.."

"Yes you do!" Justin was trying to urge the med team foward but they were scared witless of the shinobie's murderish attitude and cold eyes.

"No need. I'm related to Tsunade remember?," Cedric lifted one hand. It started to glow bright yellow. He put down all his fingers except 2. Then he put them on Merc's neck.

Merc slapped his and away and stood."I'm.Fine."She growled menicingly.

"Cedric unless you want to lose a limb just let her be...." Just slowley backed away letting Merc do her thing.

"I'm not going to let another person die!," Cedric yelled this time he used two hands. the yellow chakra rased throught her vaines. The chakra guided the blood throught the vains and not out her throut.

Merc choked and kicked Cedric."I have a desise!I puke up blood!!Now please,stop!"


Ziar walked to Yuki's house and went to the back yard and unburied her. then put some pheonixs feathers in his hands and preformed some hand signs and began channeling chakra into her body.

"Good shes starting to come back...just a few more..minutes"Ziar was fallen in and out of consiousness then he shook his head."No I gotta stay awake for alittle longer.."Ziars face started to become pale his chakra near depleted.

Ziar finished reviving Yuki."Good her color is returning and her heart is beating again."Ziar was breathing heavly



Star sighed, feeling bad for the young girl who had died. She thought of all the pain her family would have to go through and looked down sadly as she walked into the woods and sat on a rock in front of a lake, looking out.

She heard something behind her. When she turned around she saw Cedric. He walked up next to her and sat on the same rock. "hey, i know how you feel. I'm the hokage, its my responsiblity to protect this village. I'm a failour to my father," Cedric said looking out over the river.

Star looked over at Cedric "No, don't say that..you did the best you can and that's what really matters" she smiled slightly, putting a hand on his shoulder. She sighed gently and looked back at the water.

"thankyou,"Cedric said looking at Star. He looked down at the water under them. He put a hand over the water. When he turned his hand over again, there was a ball of water stuck to it. Cedric moved the water back and forth between the hands. Then suddenly he droped it and said "Somethings wronge." He made some hand signs and vanished.

"Anytime" Star answered with a small smile. She then watched as he dissepeared "Wrong?" she asked herself as she looked back down at the water.


Tsome left the ramen shop, wandering around the village, trying to take her mind off of the death of Little Yuki.

Justin lounged on the top of the acadamy spire facing the mountian. He gazed at huge brazen images of the great hokages.



"Little Yuki? Can you hear me??"Said Ziar while looking over her.

The small girl gave a hacking cough, breathing shallowly in. Her face was still dusted with tiny grains of dirt. Her fragile tightened around the faded blue cap. Although her heart beat was steady, it was too slow and soft. And though there was colour in her face, she remained unconcious.

Ziar said to himself"humm she must still be recovering I gess I'll take her inside..."Then picked her up and carried her to Yuki's house and knocked on the door."Hello anybody home?

Yuki Kinomoto pulled herself up and staggered to the door. "No ones home. Go away."

"Please just open the door..."Said Ziar kinda softly

Yuki opened the door. She stood stockstill taking in what's in her doorway. "You bastard! How dare you violate Haka like that! Couldn't you leave her body alone?!" She finished shrieking and prepared to attack the man.

Ziar sighed and appaired behind Yuki and grabed her arm."Shes not dead...I used a secret justsu in my clan to bring her back. If you don't belive me check for a heartbeat."

She panted desperatly struggling against the man. After a minute she gave up. She lifted her free hand and placed it trembling against the little girl's throat. Yuki's eyes widened, "She's... alive." Yuki shrugged out of Ziars grasp and pulled Little Yuki into her arms. "H-how?" Yuki brushed the sand off her and cradled her, her heart beating frantically she placed her head against Little Yuki's chest feeling the faint beats.

"A secret justsu that can only be used once.sometimes twice but the second time the user will die..."Ziar coughed."Well I'll leave her with you. Make wure when she wakes up you give her plenty of fluids and some healing hurbs. she might be out for a couple days..well let me know how shes doing when she wakes up."Ziar started to walk away.

"Wait! Erm, I apologise about just now. I... I'm sorry and... Thank you. My name is Yuki Kinomoto. I'm a Gennin and waiting to become a chunnin. Would you like some tea?"

Ziar chuckled alittle"Im Ziar Kerninsky.And its ok people have treated me like that my whole life I'm used to it..thanx for the offer but I really should get going"coughs up some blood then whips it away."Welp It was nice meeting you."Ziar started walking and waved.

Yuki stared at the strange mans back, "Kerninsky san! You're not fine at all! Come in! My father was a medic nin, he left the kit here somewhere, hold on! Don't you dare go anywhere!" She hefted Little Yuki's body into her arms and padded deeper into her house mumbling about internal injuries and stubborn men.

"I'll be fine.I cough up blood every now and again its allright."said Ziar trying to show no that he was fine when he really wasn't."Now I really must go theres something I must do."

"DON'T YOU DARE!!!!" Her yell came from the back room. Having settled Little Yuki apparently in the guest room, Yuki stormed out of the room into the corridor in all her righteous teenage fury. "You hold up right there, so I can get a look at you! And afterwards we're going to the hospital ward!" She came at him armed with medic supplies her father had obviously left behind. She pointed at the low table, "Sit." Her sharp eye weren't about to be argued with.

Ziar laughed"Miss I apprecate your concern but really I'll be fine."

Her eyes narrowed adngerously. "Kerninsky san. Please sit down so I can check up on you. You wouldn't keep a lady waiting would you?" Her eyebrow literally twitched in her frustration.

Ziar sighed and smiled"Ya got me there."he laughed then sat down.

Yuki leant over him and placed both hands on either side of his head. They trembled slightly as she thought back to what her father told her what to do. She could hear his voice clearly even though he has been dead for a good few years. "Send chakra through the body. Slow and steady."

The chakra made her fingertips tingle. "Sense every single cell, and they will tell you what's wrong." Her eyes screwed shut in concentration, at first she didn't notice anything and then her eyes flew open, "What did you do?! You're on a chakra burnout! It's a severe case." Her mind raced quickly remembering what her father had recited about illnessess and their symptoms and how to deal with them in place of bedtime stories. "Your remaining chakra is gathered at all the chakra points. Your vital ogans have absorbed all the shock. You need to lie down now!" Yuki began pushing him down back onto the couch. "After you lie down, I'll notify the hospital ward immediatly." She pushed him down insistantly.

Ziar grabed her arm and shook his head no"They can't do anything for me. No one can. I'm sorry but I must go now I have to talk to the Hokage."Ziar started to get up.

"Yes of course! The Hokage must know healing jutsu's right? That's the perfect place you can go to!" Yuki looked very releived. Haka's saviour will get the right treatment after all. Besides she doubted she would be able to da anything right.

Ziar smiled and said"yeap you got it. Now I'm off I'm glad I could help you. And thank you for your hospitality."Ziar bowed then disapiared.

Yuki crumbled onto the sofa, feeling vaguly disappointed. Maybe tomorrow she will meet her group and her group leader... She sat a moment before going to check on Haka. Perhaps her team leader could be lke him.



Ziar appaired next to Cedric."Hey great hokage."bows"I need to talk to you gotta a minute?"

"Uhhh... yea sure what do you need?" Cedric asked.

"Ah yes I need to tell you this first though...I'm a spy hired by the 6th hokage. I was hired to spy on my own Village acttuly.And theres a reason why I accepted.For many years the Village Hidden in the Sand has been good friends with the Leave village...Untill a couple years ago when Orochimaru killed our kage and impersanted him to pin us against you...Well afterwards we recovered and everything was normal again the Leaf forgave us and understood that we were being miss led...Well when we resigned the treaty with the you the 6th hokage asked to speak with me privatly about the new kage. I agreed and he hired me to watch and see if there was anything strange going on with the Sand village and report it to him. I agreed and he gave me some money and told me never to speak of it to my village or anyone else besides the hokage....Which is why I'm here. I acttuly didn't come back because of the up coming chunin exams. I came to tell you that the kage of the sand is not himself latly. He hasn't proposed anything like war with anyone but...ninjas in my village are disapairing after visiting with him.And when they show up again they are always extremly weak some don't even have the ability to use chakura anymore. I think that the new kage is acctuly drianing their energy to weaken our village so that an enemy village can destroy us. at this moment I'm the last jounin in my village that can fight. and my students are only genin in rank but I have trained them intensly incase my theorys are right. I'm not sure what the new kages plan truly is but its not gonna be the best for the Sand. Thats why I wanted to ask if you the Leave village would help us if we were suddenly attacked."Ziar got on his knees and bowed"Great Hokage I humbly ask you to help the Sand Village in our up coming time of need."



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2007-08-15 [Xerin Zamaki]: no just ill come in and unbury her and revie

2007-08-15 [Asalli_Angel]: eh?! How? You can't bring back a dead person.

2007-08-15 [Xerin Zamaki]: Its a special justsu my clan knows we use the feathers of a Pheonix and it takes alot of chakara usaly kills the user...

2007-08-15 [Xerin Zamaki]: Angel go toThe Hidden Village in the Sand and put your little Yuki on there and you can rp here. :)

2007-08-15 [ForeverNothing]: your a genin how r u gonna use it when ur a genin?

2007-08-15 [ForeverNothing]: how about i just use the forbidden technique, it seems more realistic?

2007-08-16 [Xerin Zamaki]: ....I'm not a genin rember im in the sand village technicly. but I'm actully a spy in other words I advanced in the sand village....

2007-08-16 [Xerin Zamaki]: and the forbidden one dosent actully revie them completly....

2007-08-16 [ForeverNothing]: k...? wait yes it does.

2007-08-16 [Xerin Zamaki]: no and my way dosent cost a human sacrifice....

2007-08-16 [ForeverNothing]: Orochimaru can be the sacrifice " my ways real" wispers to him self lol

2007-08-16 [Xerin Zamaki]: .....true but it actully dosent bring back the person whose dead its more of a summoning of the persons power my way brings back the person and there soul basiclly I bring them back the way they were not some zombie..

2007-08-16 [ForeverNothing]: huh? yea it does. and r u gonna unbury her?

2007-08-16 [Piercedskull]: YAY!SAKE!Merc might be underaged but she has a permit that aloows her to drink^^

2007-08-16 [Xerin Zamaki]: WOOOH SAKE!!!! I don't need a permit ^^

2007-08-16 [ForeverNothing]: ...

2007-08-16 [Piercedskull]: Merc does^^

2007-08-16 [Piercedskull]: Merc hates it when people interfir(sp?) with her life^^

2007-08-17 [Xerin Zamaki]: really!?!?! *grins evily* MUWHWHAHHAHAHA

2007-08-17 [Piercedskull]: ...yes...

2007-08-17 [Xerin Zamaki]: O ok*writes down*(make sure never to mess with merc...send mercenaries instead too mess with her....) XD

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